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I had to show off this awesome icon I snerched from
copperwise.
Also, Cloverfield does not suck, despite the early roller derby to boyfriend imbalance and weapons-dropping dumbness that
cmpriest mentioned. And dude--when all the animals around you are running away? Run with them. What is that last garbled thing said after the credits?
I've slogged through 175 pages of TDC so far, adding exposition (yes, you heard that right) and crunchy bits and hacking through the horrible comma-thickets and mire of awkward sentences. In addition to the justs and onlies and barelies and as ifs that I already noticed, I also have an unhealthy attachment to the "before X could Y, Z happened" construction.
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Also, Cloverfield does not suck, despite the early roller derby to boyfriend imbalance and weapons-dropping dumbness that
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I've slogged through 175 pages of TDC so far, adding exposition (yes, you heard that right) and crunchy bits and hacking through the horrible comma-thickets and mire of awkward sentences. In addition to the justs and onlies and barelies and as ifs that I already noticed, I also have an unhealthy attachment to the "before X could Y, Z happened" construction.
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Date: 2008-01-21 09:54 am (UTC)I'm glad that Cliverfield isn't sucky. Not so glad that I'll have to wait for it to come out in the UK, but still :P
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Date: 2008-01-21 11:41 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-01-21 11:59 am (UTC)This made me smile. While I was hacking away at my recently completed book, I noticed an unhealthy attachment to "barely" and also "practically"... Everything would "practically" happen - "she practically flew threw the doorway"... "it practically landed on top of him". *sigh* Either it did or it didn't, right?
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Date: 2008-01-21 01:31 pm (UTC)Also "of course" and "and then."
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Date: 2008-01-21 05:05 pm (UTC)Yes! *g*
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Date: 2008-01-21 12:06 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-01-21 04:08 pm (UTC)