Sep. 30th, 2006
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Sep. 30th, 2006 12:47 pmIf you don't like your LJ with a spammy aftertaste, go tell them to stop being lame .
She said she killed a man down in Atlanta
Sep. 30th, 2006 01:31 pmThe process of revising to editorial suggestion:
1. Read editor's notes.
2. Read sentence.
3. Agree that sentence is clunky, but not with the suggested change.
4. Rewrite sentence.
5. Not any better.
6. Rewrite paragraph.
7. Still not better.
8. Rewrite again.
9. Cry.
Also, "the clouds overhead". As opposed to the clouds underfoot? Bad writer, no cookie.
I think I need coffee now. And Bailey's.
1. Read editor's notes.
2. Read sentence.
3. Agree that sentence is clunky, but not with the suggested change.
4. Rewrite sentence.
5. Not any better.
6. Rewrite paragraph.
7. Still not better.
8. Rewrite again.
9. Cry.
Also, "the clouds overhead". As opposed to the clouds underfoot? Bad writer, no cookie.
I think I need coffee now. And Bailey's.