Argh, I say, argh
Aug. 7th, 2006 03:09 pmThis edit of "Garden" is officially the most frustrating revision since the last really frustrating revision (which was probably Dreams). Some of the suggested changes fall into that annoying between-place where I don't really want to make them, but I cannot dismiss them as cracktastic, either. My hindbrain's response to "more sense of danger" is "You encounter 2d6 chasey hound-monsters!"--which, yanno, not so useful. Though I'm not sure you can ever have too many chasey hound-monsters.
I'm very close to drowning this story in a bucket and moving on to "Blue Valentine", which I need to finish by next week.
(Ladies, don't forget: August 18th is the FSF girl-cootie slushbomb.)
But I did deposit two CD packages in the mail this morning, so go me.
I'm very close to drowning this story in a bucket and moving on to "Blue Valentine", which I need to finish by next week.
(Ladies, don't forget: August 18th is the FSF girl-cootie slushbomb.)
But I did deposit two CD packages in the mail this morning, so go me.