Argh, I say, argh
This edit of "Garden" is officially the most frustrating revision since the last really frustrating revision (which was probably Dreams). Some of the suggested changes fall into that annoying between-place where I don't really want to make them, but I cannot dismiss them as cracktastic, either. My hindbrain's response to "more sense of danger" is "You encounter 2d6 chasey hound-monsters!"--which, yanno, not so useful. Though I'm not sure you can ever have too many chasey hound-monsters.
I'm very close to drowning this story in a bucket and moving on to "Blue Valentine", which I need to finish by next week.
(Ladies, don't forget: August 18th is the FSF girl-cootie slushbomb.)
But I did deposit two CD packages in the mail this morning, so go me.
I'm very close to drowning this story in a bucket and moving on to "Blue Valentine", which I need to finish by next week.
(Ladies, don't forget: August 18th is the FSF girl-cootie slushbomb.)
But I did deposit two CD packages in the mail this morning, so go me.