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Tyop: "How is he?" / "Alice. For the moment."
Darling: "I’ll begin a batch of bread mold—that and prayer are your options now."
Mean things: Cracked rib, hemothorax, and a very crude tube thoracostomy. And of course the remaining blood left inside his chest, which may or may not turn septic.

It was touch and go for a bit--giving someone a hemothorax is one thing; describing the treatment of it is something else. I finally settled for some gore and handwaving. Tomorrow the characters will convene for a fact-finding mission to discover the plot.

Date: 2011-12-04 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/la_marquise_de_/
'Alice for the moment' would be an awesome short story title.

Date: 2011-12-04 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fadethecat.livejournal.com
"Gore And Handwaving" is totally the title of my next short story.

Date: 2011-12-05 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jakobdrud.livejournal.com
Love that tyop :-)

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