Living in films for the sake of Russia

80s buddy cop movies are dear to my heart, but Red Heat doesn't quite make the grade. It needed some actually chemistry between the leads, and better bad guys. (Asking for plot or script would just be unfair.) And the lack of chemistry is not actually Arnold's fault. He appeared to be trying very hard in this one, for Arnold standards of trying. Hell, he actually emoted in a couple of scenes. It did have saxophone chase scenes, though.

Now I need to think of some cool antags for Salvage.

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Back from the gym, and trying to muster the wherewithal to clean up and go grocery shopping.

Today's revising revelation was that I have completely screwed up my timeline. Bone Palace takes place two years after TDC, not three or even four, as I have stated various places in the text. Two years. Really. Well, technically two and a half.

Today I added an expository transition in chapter 2, and typed in my line edits through the end of chapter 4. I still need a new scene to introduce a POV character earlier--probably either at the end of chapter 1 or the beginning of 3--but I have no idea what this scene should be.

5 / 23 chapters. 22% done!