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(No, not a Rob Zombie CD)
After my mostly-joking zombie poll, I reread the first 2k of "Red Is the Color" to test for YAabilification. And lo and behold, it takes almost no effort to make Audra a teenager instead of a 20-something. It also makes some of the relationship conflicts stronger. Natalie doesn't mind becoming a teenager, either. When you're already dead that doesn't matter so much. The first few scenes would also greatly benefit by 100% more setting and character description. This doesn't bode well.
YA would mean toning down the sex, which would be a blessing to me. I already know way too much about these girls' kinks.
Luckily, I know they have been paid off by The Bone Palace to distract me right before my deadline, so I will throw them in an oubliette until I have more leisure. Also luckily, they don't have a proper working title, which makes it easier to ignore them.
After my mostly-joking zombie poll, I reread the first 2k of "Red Is the Color" to test for YAabilification. And lo and behold, it takes almost no effort to make Audra a teenager instead of a 20-something. It also makes some of the relationship conflicts stronger. Natalie doesn't mind becoming a teenager, either. When you're already dead that doesn't matter so much. The first few scenes would also greatly benefit by 100% more setting and character description. This doesn't bode well.
YA would mean toning down the sex, which would be a blessing to me. I already know way too much about these girls' kinks.
Luckily, I know they have been paid off by The Bone Palace to distract me right before my deadline, so I will throw them in an oubliette until I have more leisure. Also luckily, they don't have a proper working title, which makes it easier to ignore them.
