The Drowning CityMost of the little edits are done. I still need to clarify a couple points, then move on to the two big things, and then finish going through the whole thing to fix clunky sentences and make sure characters don't grow or shrink six inches between chapters. One of the big things is tricksy, as it involves taking a scene out of the prologue and inserting it later on as a flashback. I'm not sure whether I should break it up and insert bits and pieces as flashbulb memories at relevant bits, or dump it in somewhere entire, or what. I'd stick it in as a dream scene, just to annoy the haters, but really I have never had a memory-dream. Dreams that reminded me of things, sure, but never reliving whole scenes. Maybe I can do something cute with a series of PTSD flashbulbs...
Hopefully I'll get author photos taken on Saturday. Now I have to figure out what to wear.