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A terrible secret revealed...
Sep. 10th, 2008 11:11 pmOld Faithful, not that impressive actually. :P Or maybe it was just the cold and my ongoing PMS. Who can say? And unless we're missing some hidden gems, the food in West Yellowstone kinda blows. Yes, I am fussy and demanding. The park in general is gorgeous, though.
On the brighter side, I fussed and demanded my way through about 20k of line-edits on Dreams in the car this morning. I continue to spot new places to plug in exposition and character bits. Some day I'd like to spot these places on the first draft.
Dreams
Several more scenes that need to be redone from scratch to slog through, then a small respite with things that just need a good scrubbing.
On the brighter side, I fussed and demanded my way through about 20k of line-edits on Dreams in the car this morning. I continue to spot new places to plug in exposition and character bits. Some day I'd like to spot these places on the first draft.
Dreams
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Several more scenes that need to be redone from scratch to slog through, then a small respite with things that just need a good scrubbing.
