I'd rather be inside you

I do not question Gretchen's commitment to Sparkle Motion--or to walks or parks or streams or meeting other dogs.

This book, on the other hand...



Never mind the back, that's a huge like. And I see frowned and looked and swallowed, none of which should be that prevalent. Alas.

I'm in the middle of chapter 5 now, and I'm definitely cleaning up the prose. Good god, this thing was choppy. But now I'm hitting the scenes where lots of information is being conveyed in a totally boring manner. I might need to do something about that