Picnic-march, Day 1
Jun. 29th, 2008 01:59 amSince I'd rather do any catwaxy worldbuildy thing besides actually work on a novel, I think I'll try to picnic-march (which is like death-marching, but with sandwiches and naps) some short stories before Readercon.
"Bone Garden"
Words today: 550
Words total: 2291
Reason for stopping: It's two in the morning, and I have a headache.
Sustenance: Tazo berryblossom white, dates, chocolate, and lemon stilton, because I cannot. Stop. Snacking.
Tyop: frozen in her lack
Darling: For a moment she looked like Ophelia in Undine, frozen in her lake. He wished he knew how to recreate the image on stage.
Yes, Gentian makes me think up fake operas. I suspect that's a little too cutely meta, but I can't think of a name that unpacks so easily that's less obvious. Any suggestions?
Mean things: shame, guilt, unpleasant memories, pleasant memories
Quirks: I can't stop the cousincest vibes from pouring off the page, even though Gentian swears he doesn't have the hots for the girl. I say he's in denial, he says I'm projecting. But since I'm writing the damn thing, he should really just lie back and think of England.
Research: If I could stop and wiki a thing, by god I did. Examples include: Erisinian tap water and what it might smell/taste like, Ukrainian food, the Black Sea, the Caspian Sea, sea monsters, fake operas, and Hungarian grammar. Much of this was not directly relevant to the story. :P I also need to make a map of the city and figure out what goes where, but that can wait till tomorrow.
I still don't know what the demons are doing.
"Bone Garden"
Words today: 550
Words total: 2291
Reason for stopping: It's two in the morning, and I have a headache.
Sustenance: Tazo berryblossom white, dates, chocolate, and lemon stilton, because I cannot. Stop. Snacking.
Tyop: frozen in her lack
Darling: For a moment she looked like Ophelia in Undine, frozen in her lake. He wished he knew how to recreate the image on stage.
Yes, Gentian makes me think up fake operas. I suspect that's a little too cutely meta, but I can't think of a name that unpacks so easily that's less obvious. Any suggestions?
Mean things: shame, guilt, unpleasant memories, pleasant memories
Quirks: I can't stop the cousincest vibes from pouring off the page, even though Gentian swears he doesn't have the hots for the girl. I say he's in denial, he says I'm projecting. But since I'm writing the damn thing, he should really just lie back and think of England.
Research: If I could stop and wiki a thing, by god I did. Examples include: Erisinian tap water and what it might smell/taste like, Ukrainian food, the Black Sea, the Caspian Sea, sea monsters, fake operas, and Hungarian grammar. Much of this was not directly relevant to the story. :P I also need to make a map of the city and figure out what goes where, but that can wait till tomorrow.
I still don't know what the demons are doing.