Progress continues

Pinion

17338 / 70000 words. 25% done!
Tyop: winding around her angles, the closer pear approaches, coffein--that might be an energy drink for vampires

Yesterday and today I added a new scene to the beginning, and a chunk of exposition to another scene. I think I have most everything laid out now, at least enough for a first draft. I'm also switching to present tense, just so people can bitch about it later. I wish I had some 2nd person I could add. :P