Jan. 3rd, 2008
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Jan. 3rd, 2008 11:41 pmNin90 Day 3
Prayers to Broken Stone
Words today: 2195
Words total: 7147
7147 / 67500 words. 11% done!
Opening lines: Cate can't sleep that night, even after she draws the curtains in her hotel room, blocking the sight of the mirror-black sea. She lies in the warm darkness, hugging a pillow against her chest and trying to explain away what she saw.
Closing lines: And now she has to find him again. It would be easier if she didn't love him. His face lingers behind her eyes as she sinks into sleep. (Yeah, a little emo there. Might fix that in the next pass.)
Story quirks: I've found the first thematic concept of this book--insomnia. No one around here sleeps well. (Other overused words that I'll call thematic include dust, stone, bones, and shadows.)
I was going to do more, but I got distracted by the need to update my scanner drivers, which triggered PMSy wrath. The first target of my wrath--the SciFi channel. If I suffer through one more of their train-wreck original movies only to watch a competent black guy (Coolio no less, goddammit! Coolio, I will buy you a water heater!) die so some useless-ass white guy can live, I am going to cut a bitch. Many bitches. As many as I can find.
Maybe I can find some white people to kill in Prayers.
Also, Fantasy's favorite story of 2007 poll. Not that I am shamelessly pandering for votes or anything.
Prayers to Broken Stone
Words today: 2195
Words total: 7147
Opening lines: Cate can't sleep that night, even after she draws the curtains in her hotel room, blocking the sight of the mirror-black sea. She lies in the warm darkness, hugging a pillow against her chest and trying to explain away what she saw.
Closing lines: And now she has to find him again. It would be easier if she didn't love him. His face lingers behind her eyes as she sinks into sleep. (Yeah, a little emo there. Might fix that in the next pass.)
Story quirks: I've found the first thematic concept of this book--insomnia. No one around here sleeps well. (Other overused words that I'll call thematic include dust, stone, bones, and shadows.)
I was going to do more, but I got distracted by the need to update my scanner drivers, which triggered PMSy wrath. The first target of my wrath--the SciFi channel. If I suffer through one more of their train-wreck original movies only to watch a competent black guy (Coolio no less, goddammit! Coolio, I will buy you a water heater!) die so some useless-ass white guy can live, I am going to cut a bitch. Many bitches. As many as I can find.
Maybe I can find some white people to kill in Prayers.
Also, Fantasy's favorite story of 2007 poll. Not that I am shamelessly pandering for votes or anything.