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Four chapters revised so far. I figured out something to do about the pov problems, involving cutting one character and choosing new ones to play up some thematic stuff. I hope it works. I've rewritten three scenes in new povs so far--after the second, it stopped giving me a physical reaction.
I was worried for a minute when I realized that the new pov choices would mean that all but one of them dies, but I decided to let someone live with her consequences instead, so poor Isyllt won't be left to do all the wrapping up on her own.
Next up, chapter five, where I finally get rid of the pretty boy. My affirmative action plan did not work out at all. :P
Today I stalked the wild living room set and successfully captured one. For the first time ever, I shall matching furniture that I didn't put together myself. I also dragged in some bookcases from the garage, only to realize I have no clue where I put the shelf pegs.
I was worried for a minute when I realized that the new pov choices would mean that all but one of them dies, but I decided to let someone live with her consequences instead, so poor Isyllt won't be left to do all the wrapping up on her own.
Next up, chapter five, where I finally get rid of the pretty boy. My affirmative action plan did not work out at all. :P
Today I stalked the wild living room set and successfully captured one. For the first time ever, I shall matching furniture that I didn't put together myself. I also dragged in some bookcases from the garage, only to realize I have no clue where I put the shelf pegs.
