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Jul. 17th, 2005 01:46 pmIt's entertaining to read through a story I started two years ago and see what sort of writing tricks I was working on in various chapters. The biggest one in this book seems to be grounding detail. This book is about to collapse under the weight of details, none of which seem particularly telling.
*lays waste with a flame thrower*
*lays waste with a flame thrower*